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So I did notice something though guys, and here's what I noticed. So some ideas are strong, but the audience cannot always see them clearly. So here's what I want to do. You know what? Do not hate me. I'd like you guys to go up one more time and try to show it even more clearly. Same group. Same group. Try to show it even more clearly and think about from an audience perspective them seeing it. Show us. Think about the sentence frame. The character's objective is because, so I will. How are you showing them these things? They're just they're going to try to make their they're going to try to show even more depth what it is their character's objective, the motivation, and what they are doing to show that. So, remember you dropped to your knees and you begged. That was showing. Um, Elite grabbed her ribs. That was showing. Sienna got close to the box. That was showing. Think of how you can show us even more to where it's so obvious. All right. And go.
>> Oh, look. There's only one slice of pizza left. Who wants it?
>> There's. There's. There's.
>> Please, please. I need it. Please, please, Mary, give me the pizza. Give me the pizza, Mary. Mary, I need the pizza, PLEASE. OH MY GOD, HE'S MY FAVORITE type of flavor of pizza. Jeez, can I please have it? I've only ever had
>> like spirit. Spirit, please.
>> You think you need. You NEED. YOU DO NOT NEED THE PIZZA. I've not eaten in 3 weeks. And you want it cuz it's pepper. It's not pepperoni.
>> I've been eating rats and fleas and dirt. You don't understand.
>> No. This is mine. This is mine.
>> It's my pizza.
>> This is my pizza.
>> Give me the pizza.
>> I'm deleting you.
>> Okay. And scene. Okay, cool. All right.
So, what's something that we noticed real quick? Let's go through this real quick cuz the day is almost through. Yes, Angelo.
>> Uh, I noticed that for Siana, she put in way more emotion. She actually got like super super close. She got amazing to do to for the visa because she really really liked it.
>> So that's how we see the desperation. That's what you did physically to show us. Okay. What about for Zena?
>> You were already good.
>> No, but but what did she do in this scene to show us?
>> Um.
>> What did she do?
>> She showed a lot of emotion and when she got on her knees, it was like she was like she really really wanted it. She was chasing me on her knees.
>> Good. That's what we're looking for. Yes.
>> Can I say? Can I say for?
>> Yes. For next.
>> So, basically, when the pizza fell, Alidi still went over to get it because she hasn't ate.
>> Yeah.
>> Okay. What about for Chloe?
>> For Chloe, she seemed very she seemed very full of the pizza, so she decided to be kind and give some to her friends that have been like really and We started all arguing and she didn't know what to do.
>> Very good. How did she How did you pick that up though? What What was she doing physically that showed you that?
>> She seemed like very like going like moving a lot and doing a lot of head movement when they would like move this way and
>> Okay. How about for Mir?
>> For it was like he didn't try to share the pizza with nobody or let anybody at least one bite and he was like he put way more emotion in it too.
>> Okay. How did he show us though? Sophia, what did Mir do that show?
>> Were they laughing at their suffering?
>> Yes. Yes.
>> Yes. Okay. Good job, guys. Give him a round of applause. job.